i like the style u have written this oneshot in :)

I'm a fan of your works, have been for some time now. Often I find myself reading and re reading yoru works. Like this one. Thank you so much :D

WOW! This oneshot just blew me away! I'ts so deep and very detailed. I love the feel of it. It's really good.

That was a good story, I liked it alot.

This is truly a great fic. You put a unique, realistic view on both of the Hyuugas and how they need each other. I love it. Good job!

You know the song, "Things I'll Never Say" by Avril Lavigne fits this particular story very well. Job well done.
Lots of Love,
Talapadme

Cute.

-Insane Slytherin

i love you too, neji.

hahahahaha

whoa thats cool.
u portrayed neji very well,
this would have made a crazy story

Aw! This is so sweet! =)

Gahh!! So sweet, I love love love it.

Again, excellent job. Just wanted to point something out to you--on your 6th line from the bottom (including "owari"), the paragraph that starts with "you don't move away...," there's an error. You say after that "when her finally takes her hand off your heart," I believe you mean "when SHE."

Keep writing NeijixHinata! Thanks so much for sharing your work!

I swear I've read this before. I've read like all your NejiHina's at least thrice. And still, every other sentence in this kills me.
"...she understands everything that you don’t say..."

that's epic and that's gold.

keep it up and do write more, it's been too long since I've read good NejiHina!
~Mirai

yeah i don't expect him to be the expressive emotional type. that would come as a surprise. well another touching fic.

i can't say enough how wonderful it is the way you detailed the story without using any conversation at all. i love it. this's a great story. good job.

Nice! I mean, it's good that you can express the situation and their feelings in such a real way that it almost seems as if it's the real thing... what a story! ^_^