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| Girl 2007-11-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseGood work, so Tyson is the daddy and it would've been much much better if you have added the sex bit in, it will make it more romantic. You shouldve let Tyson sleep on top of her or something.Or even kiss her...you know...well good work.I mean Excellent work. |
| Ashley Hearts 2006-12-07 ch 17,  | abuseYou are simply great you are simply great you are simply great,ok ok I stop , but you are such good at writing stories i cant help to read it again and again , well please try persnol messaging with me . Congratulations you are in my fav story and authors list.Hey i well um i um i um ... ok first you give your info ok. |
| laila 2006-08-29 ch 17, anon. | abusekai is so*shudder* OCish |
| MarineDweller 2006-07-15 ch 17, | abuseHey, ur story's great. I hope u keep writing exciting stories as this... |
| dbzgtfan2004 2006-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Tyson and Hilary forever. |
| Rawr Its Maddy 2006-04-15 ch 17, | abuseTHE END NEVER! LOVED IT THOUGH! GREAT STORY |
| Corn- The OTHER White Meat 2006-04-15 ch 17, | abuseEmmi: HA! And who says babies aren't smart? GO EMILY! I wish it wasn't over. DO A SEQUEL!! |
| SwordOfTheJedi 2006-04-15 ch 17, | abuseNO! It can't be over! |
| aquariusfan 2006-04-14 ch 17, | abuseTHAT WAS A GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT! I LOVED THE ENDING! lol. THANX! |
| luvisgood 2006-04-13 ch 17, | abusewow!! THATS SO NICE! |
| Bayleef 2006-04-12 ch 17, | abuseAww! YAY! I was worried for a second, I thought they weren't gonna get together! YAY! Hero said daddy! That's so cute! |
| Warrior of Virtue 2006-04-11 ch 17, | abuseThat was a pretty good fic. |
| Osakachan108 2006-04-11 ch 17, | abuseOMG! It's all over now... whah! I'm okay now, wow, thta was uber good. I can't wait for antoher sotry like this by you again! |
| violetctm 2006-04-11 ch 17, | abuseaw... haha. great ending to a great story. well done! |
| The Death-Ghost 2006-04-11 ch 12, | abuseDarnnit Tyson, tell her! Well, I don't like the story, I love it! Continue please!! |