Hey, it’s me again I really loved these poems, the 2nd and the 3rd most of all. I liked the sense of time in the second one almost as if it was prophesizing. and last two lines of the final poem really got through, it seemed to me that even though he was not born of man and is majestic and noble, being around humans and their war has left him tainted his faith in the light shaken, in all he has seen in his long life a seed of doubt has been planted. He did not get away unscathed he has tasted humanity and will carry it with him always, I don’t know if that is what you were going for but I’m sure you can appreciate the beauty interpretation in poems and how they can effect many people in different ways. ^-^

o SAHIb was right! This is beautiful aloud! I call for a poetry reading in Rivendell three days hence! Will you join us and read your piece aloud? I hope so . I wrote a silly piece about "A Knife in the Dark" the chapter of FOR. Please lemme know what u think when i post it! :) this is gorgeous though! Thanks!

Hope I can see more coming.

This one is so much fun to read aloud!

Once again AWESOME!!

wonderful poem and weel sumerized and rhymed!!