this fic is pretty good. The only things that NEED to be improved are the uses of the Inuyasha cast's names, I.e Kilala should be Kirara, Koga should be Kouga. And please either use the words;Damn, Hell, Bastard, and all other words, or dont use them at all. I really hated reading "Bas!” Inuyasha charged at Naraku with his Tetusaiga in hand". Either use the whole word or dont use it at all. Everuthing else was pretty good though.

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That was really good! I agree with Barbara! I love it! Please write more and I'll read the rest of your chapters! for you!