I don't know if you have any plans to, as the last update appears to have been in 05, but it would be awesome if you could continue your story!

I love all your characters and the dialogue is very well written and natural.

Keep it up!

Shichi
:3

This is a really well written story. I'm guessing that you are basing it off the post miniseries Dinotopia? that's how it seems, with the talk of life partners and the descripton of the Hatchery. Still, very good. I especially liked how you didn't have the egg be 'miraculously' alive after immersion.

Keep it going. Also, ana remember that the sack is in her pocket.

^^ I loved it! It's keeping me interested. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!

please update your stroy is very good and is quiet promising

Interesting. I will wait to see where you take this before offering more.

this is a real good story! i hope that you update soon!

I like, update soon please...