Omg love this!

Can you write a sequel? Add in some friendships with the other pilots and make them all over-protective of Duo? Send me a message if you do please.

Good job with the first chapter, really realistic! Did you spend some time in Japan? I was an exchange student about 5 years ago and went back last summer to visit. I love it there ]...I just wanted to warn you that kisama...isn't really a nice word. From my experince. Of course different places in Japan have different words for everything (take the word "itai" for example, in Okinawa they say "aga" instead...XD) so if you have been and did use it in the context you're talking about and it was ok then you can ignore this. A more appropriate sentence for that context would be "anta ga aru ka?" since I assume that heero's uncle and him aren't super-formal with each other...especially if he called him Oji-San as opposed to "sama" or "chama".

Also...that uniform is FREAKING CHEAP! so cheap... 580 yen is like $5.50...at my school the skirt alone cost 9800 yen, had to be ordered a week in advance and you needed to have it fit to you...students were required to buy their own. Including the shirt and tie it wouldve cost me like $120 (I borrowed a classmates XD)...I also gotta point out that decent sneakers in Japan are usually upwards of 150 yen, usually bordering along the lines of 20 yen and converse are probably like 10 since (even though they are cheaper) they are SUPER popular. It would make sense that Duo couldn't afford a new pair XD

Either way, great start to the story, I will read on!

its a very nice story. i love it. Heero and Duo are sweet.

Thanks.

I ain't so cool that I as here when you began so I can't say I've stuck with you but I kind of can too because I'm totally going to beg you for an update.

-insert random fangirly blather that no one can understand-

-insert after the accusstomed squeeling-

I'm really lazy right now but I'll reviewreview later...lol

update please

are you going to update? please do! i love this ficcie!

Hi there! Great fic!

Aw... Poor Duo! Solo's abusing him, hurting him and sometimes or maybe occasionally rape him... He had to suffer all those bad things from his own uncle! Not only that... He hasn't even seen his parents for a long time now and they don't know anything! Thank God, Heero followed him home at that time or he wouldn't have found out what was really happening! Not to mention he rescued him! Poor Duo! *sobs* At least Odin and Heero are helping him cope up with things! Not to mention they're together! They're so cute! *squeal*

OMG! Someone blocked their path! People they don't know! Thank God, they got away! *sighs in relief* But the danger is FAR FROM OVER! If only Heero agreed to wait for Odin then they wouldn't have been at that school to begin with! Not to mention, Duo wouldn't have been beaten! sGods, that Kobayashi's a bastard! How could he? If I was there I would have rip him to shreds! Poor Duo! *cries* sNow he run off because Heero told him to but the Bastard's after him and what if Solo shows up? How about the police and Odin? Heero has to catch up! Gods, I hope Duo will be fine and Heero'll arrive in time!

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS FIC! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PRETTY PLEASE! PLEASE WITH CHERRY ON TOP! PLEASE WITH PUPPY EYES! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M BEGGING YOU! PLEASE UPDATE! _

No please update soon i really need to know Duos ok .. wow this is such a thrilling story. please please update soon.

Hm, I like this story but can't you make Duo a bit more erhm, tough? :P I do like the story for what its worth. _ Its a bit dark but hey, thats were people have anime/manga obsessions for, neh? *wink* Hope ya put up the next chap soon!

X from Wolfje

your story is great!

oh i want to read more.

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Yay you updated! How could you end it where you did. ::cries::

Up date soon. Huggles

Nikkler

Yey! Glad you continued it! But Duo could fight back too...

i'm glad to see an update to this fic and i can't wait to see what you have in store for heero and duo in the next chapter. update again as soon as you can :) !

Lots of action in this chappie, the only problem is, I've forgotten a lot of what happened before.