Has anyone ever said 'wow'? This is really interesting! I hope you find the time to continue one day. I'm curious as to where it goes from here- if she goes through with it does she actually start to care for him? Do her friends try to get her back? Is Naraku actually that curious or is he after something else? Also I really like your writing style. It carries very well and it isn't just the 'then this happened and then that happened' sort of writing that occurs sometimes. It's very frustrating when the story idea is good! Anyways great writing and story premise. :)

i really want to see what you plan on happening next please update

Ookami-chan...I truly truly hope you will update this story soon. Pretty please with a cherry on top. This story has now become my fav Nar/Kag story. The way you wrote the characters and put the story together is simply brilliant. I hope you will update soon.

Hello! I found your story on AFF and decided to find it here! I absolutely adore your story and your portrayal of Naraku. He has always been a favorite of mine off Inuyasha.

On your profile you said the ending will be posted somewhere else, I was wondering(and hoping) that when you do get the next chapter out you put up a link? I would absolutely LOVE to figure out how this all ends. C:

hope your well!

-eev

This sounds like a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it. I wonder if Naraku will strike any more deals involving the others? *hint hint*

holy crap this is awesome. naraku has got to be my very guy character from inuyasha, and i love the way you portray him. its intelligent evil thats best, and the way he keeps bringing out the groups selfishness is great. too bad it seems like its not going further than this. i love it anyway. thank you

Genius. Pure and utter, unadulterated genius. That it was the dialogue in itself that held me in this story proves you are a true giant in the field of publishing, screenwriting, and plot.

Every subtle movement, every sentence feeling as though it were excruciatingly planned, meticulously gone over, and lovingly laid for a story that is truly at the pinnacle of what could be considered moral debate.

Intelligence in writing is a rare thing found on such a common network of fannartists that I believe it most rewarding to give it a review. That being said, I don't hardly ever review unless the story has meritted some kind of attention. I merely appreciate your efforts as a writer.

Thank you for the pleasure of reading something that was truly great.

Godsspiker

wait why didnt you have inuyasha reaction at the end...you should have would of showed how much he cares for her ad how much it would hurt him if she did that...any way interesting story. very true actually if u think about it...he is alwas watching..

! Why have I not read this before! Why hasn't this been updated! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!

intense story, I sure hope you finish it. it's wonderful, truly. you write so well.

this was really great

how did I miss this story it's so good

My God, but this is an amazing story. You're very talented. Can one hope for an update?

This is quite possibly the coolest (and most believable) concept for a Kagome/Naraku fic I have ever read. Very in-depth and it definitely makes me think of my own life and what love for me means.

You should really update this soon! I totally love the macabre twist and the KagomeNaraku. And the way you've got Naraku's character down pat- it's great!