great story.

What a great chapter, seagull! I'm so glad you're continuing with this story, its beautiful. Keep up the great work. I absolutely love reading your wonderful work :)

LOL so far im loving it i cant wait for harm and mac to see eachother again and will that commander be shocked i kinda feel sorry for him. BTW i hope harm asks her to marry him please update very soon!

Can't wait for the GW trip. Wilkinson meeting Rabb,should be... job. still hooked.

This guy, Wilkerson, better not try anything with Mac. If he does, I hope she and Harm both kick his butt back to wherever he came from! I can't wait for her and harm to see each other!

This is a v. melancholy little fic - I don't mind that at all, I'm just so v. surprised at how good some lucky people are at expressing melancholy! (I just suffer from it regularly and then I normally cannot string two coherent syllables together while speaking and my writing goes equally constipated!) Congrats on that! I'm v. concerned at where you are going with this new commander (I don't remember his surname now, just that his first name is Jon) and Harm's Mac, though...(as well I should be, being a dyed-in-the-wool H/M shipper!)

Marianne

great story.

Ooh, let's hope that Wilkinson person keeps his hands off of mac. although he seems like a good enough guy, not all icky like vukovic on jag. Glad to see you're bringing harm and mac together. don't wait to long before you post another chapter this time!

YAY! An update! More! Stupid Wilkinson hehehe.

good storie, please write soon more

i can not wait for the next chapter. i hope you update soon.

Please let Mac remain loyal to Harm. I'm so tired of her falling prey to every guy that "winks" at her. Jon needs to be put in his place and fast.

This appears to be going in a really bad direction - ah! I need more!

Hm...I'm not sure how this is going to turn out, but I'm interested to see more of Jon and how Mac and Harm deal with separation. Please keep going!

Great opening chapters... I can't believe tho that anything will start between Jon & Mac... surely not. If that's where you're heading you're challenge will be to make it even remotely believable. Post soon pls...