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hugochupe133 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseThis is such a wonderful story and I think I've read it about ten times now... I love the symbolism with the drowning and the water. Beautifully written, especially for your first story.
Graymoon74 2007-10-20 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant. But you know that =)
KittyX1981 2006-08-31 ch 1,	abuselike it
achingankle 2005-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseHuuray! THat story fit in so well with my image of what is going on inside Sara`s head. * Five stars!
Cherrydrops12 2005-10-08 ch 1,	abuselove it well done, will there be more?
Lanta 2005-09-11 ch 1,	abuseCan't believe I haven't read this story before considering how much I love your other ones. It was brilliant, and I love that you didn't invent a history for Sara. Definately adding it to my 'favourite stories' list.
Eden Eyes 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abusegreat job! :P
Miss Adelon 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseOk, I have to say this. If you ever publish a book, please tell me. I'll be the first to buy it. I've been saying this chapter after chapter in "Faithful Light". Your writing is exquisite. It's so graphic and believable that it felt like I was the one taking a panic attack. You go girl. And it ended in the perfect moment. Thank you for not having continued it. No made-up past for Sara.
Almeida's-Angel24 2005-05-03 ch 1,	abuseWow! This was amazing! Ok, after reading Faitful Light, I figured you'd been writing G/S stories for a LONG time!! I didn't realize that you hadn't!! That is just amazing! You are a wonderful writer and I am just in LOVE with your stuff. I've now read all of them that are listed! :D Please keep up your writing, because you are excellent!
Sunrays and Saturdays 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abuseThe last time I tried to submit a review for this, the servers went down and it wouldn't let me - I was so disappointed, but at least I get to now. You really nailed the anxiety of the panic attack very well - I take panic attacks frequently, and I was able to relate to Sara's situation very strongly (which was nice - it made the story more enjoyable for me somewhat). Usually when fanfic authors write about panic attacks it's just "she was taking a panic attack" without actually explaining what happens during a panic attack, how it feels, and what goes through the mind of the person, etc. However, you did it wonderfully, so either you've taken panic attacks before and KNOW from experience what it's like or you really did your research. Either way, you nailed it, and your story really benefitted from that. - Ash
inlya 2005-04-14 ch 1,	abuseThis story is wonderful, if this is your first story about GS, you absolutely know how to write them. Great work, I could feel her fear. You're an amazing writer and I'm looking foreward for more chapters. More Please :) Miriam
Utmb 2005-01-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is heartwarming and terribly sad, I've got tears threatning to spill over! So very well written, I can't wait for more. Absolutely Love it :D
Utmb 2005-01-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is heartwarming and terribly sad, I've got tears threatning to spill over! So very well written, I can't wait for more. Absolutely Love it :D
brainfear 2005-01-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was really excellent. I absolutely LOVED it. You write angst really well. I can't wait to read more CSI fics from you. :o)
Caia 2005-01-03 ch 1,	abuseIs there more?? I liked it soo much!! I think it's one of the first CSI fics I read. Really deep! I loved it, but really, do you tell Sara's story and Grissom's reaction to it or did you just decide that was the end?

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