Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze

This first chapter is very interesting! ^_^
~serl_gee

ah! so so sweet! I love it! please write more!!

I liked this story, pretty cute at the end. I'll look foward to read some of your stories in the future.

I like happy endings too. Don't be squeamish about that, it was good.

Glad you decided to write it even if you didn't get the number of reviews you were looking for. Good so far, my only comment on grammar is that you use slow in several places where you should use slowly.

The story was really good! But there is a slight mistake in the secound chapter where in the paragraph that stats out with however. You forgot the not in "It was kenshin". The basic outline of the story was very good and I liked how you got to the point but I think it would be even better if you expanded in the detail of your story.
All in all I thought it was very, very nice. Good job!

yea. sappy... but i luv sappy! angsty make me sad...

you suck

^_^ yay! a great ending! ^_^ wahoo!! you should write more stories! or i should check your others out or something, ya know? ^_^ ttyl! buh bye!

This is a very exciting story and it has a very unique plot. I just wish their were more chapters to read. Please post chapter 3 soon!!

please! continue!

really cool story. please update

NO!Its so good! why did you have to stop it right there! NO UPDATE SOON!
please please please! i really really really like it!

OxAshiteruxO

great chapter! ^_^ update SOON!