"She appeared to be performing an emergency tonsillectomy with her tongue."


LOL. Nice story.

Really cute short story. I loved the teasing between John and Devon. Thanks so much for sharing.

That was amusing and sexy. Poor Danziger and his vivid imagination.

Great one shot! Loved it! Very cute and very passionate at points! Good job!

Funny and hot. The best combination!

Oh, my, that was yummy! Humor, heat and the characters in character; what a nice read.

Oh yes, very nice. I almost fell off my chair laughing at how John got Alonzo and Julia's attention. Very very nice. I'd love to read anotgher chapter of two of John and Devon's fantacies.

That was really good, I hope you write another chapter (or two). I'd love to know what you have planned for Devon and John

This was great! I love Earth 2 fic and I think you really captured everyone really well. Can't wait to read more from you:)