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| JessicaSteenFan 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuse"She appeared to be performing an emergency tonsillectomy with her tongue." LOL. Nice story. |
| carolann 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseReally cute short story. I loved the teasing between John and Devon. Thanks so much for sharing. |
| Indygodusk 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was amusing and sexy. Poor Danziger and his vivid imagination. |
| Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2005-09-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat one shot! Loved it! Very cute and very passionate at points! Good job! |
| notthereanymore1111 2005-09-06 ch 1, | abuseFunny and hot. The best combination! |
| Fanwoman 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, my, that was yummy! Humor, heat and the characters in character; what a nice read. |
| Lattelady 2005-02-16 ch 1, | abuseOh yes, very nice. I almost fell off my chair laughing at how John got Alonzo and Julia's attention. Very very nice. I'd love to read anotgher chapter of two of John and Devon's fantacies. |
| pam 2005-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good, I hope you write another chapter (or two). I'd love to know what you have planned for Devon and John |
| Kat 2005-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was great! I love Earth 2 fic and I think you really captured everyone really well. Can't wait to read more from you:) |