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| Spaceape 2008-05-01 ch 29, | abuseThisi s gerat!! I love it! it's one of the best stories I ever read on this site!! really awesome!! Sadly it is the end of the triology... SNIF!! well I'll just have to read it ALL OVER AGAIN hahah Space |
| BurningTheMidnightOil 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseSimply beautiful work. |
| Nici 2008-01-22 ch 29, anon. | abuseI have just finished your trilogy and wanted to write and say 'what an accomplishment!' I cannot belive you've managed to do this with everything you say has been going on in your life. Anyway, I absolutely love it! My favourite is definitely Learned by Heart but as an epic trilogy they all work well together. I've read Torment as well and I think thats my favourite overall. I just love the realisation, angst and gradual development of the relationship in that one. Being British I do have to cringe VERY occassinally with regards to the odd cheese factor but deep down I know I love it. Brilliant writing, please keep it up. |
| bluedragon1836 2007-08-02 ch 29, | abuseI loved it. |
| bluedragon1836 2007-08-02 ch 25, | abusethat was soo sweet. And please, don't do anything too evil. |
| rankokunalpha1 2007-07-09 ch 29, | abuseevil ending! loved the sorry! |
| liketoread 2007-07-03 ch 29, | abuseAbsolutely, completely, positively satisfying! And I *so* look forward to those future stories. And I'm enjoying Torment of Tantalus even now. Thank you for sharing your gift of storytelling with us; I'm glad it gives you a much-needed respite from RL. |
| getcarter 2007-06-26 ch 29, | abuseLOL what a great ending!! Loved that last line. Thanks for sharing such a great journey. |
| FORD B 2007-06-26 ch 29, | abuseA very good and funny ending! Is there more to come or is this the end? I figure it is the end, but I have to ask. |
| Rachel500 2007-06-26 ch 29, | abuseGreat ending to the trilogy of stories you've written in this series. You have a great writing style, its warm, funny and accessible; informal without being grammatically incorrect. Your plotting and story telling is spot on. And as much as I would hate losing you from the fanfic world, I would seriously encourage you to try an original romance novel - you're a natural. |
| ARomanticAtHeart 2007-06-25 ch 29, | abuseNothing says it better than Ah sigh!... Another great story comes to a close. I have enjoyed reading them all. |
| janissima 2007-06-25 ch 29, | abuseGreat epilogue - I loved so much about it, but the best things were Woolsey getting absolutely nothing (never could stand that smary SOB) and of course, the ending when Jack opened the package from Teal'c and Daniel. Just wish you would have written a wee bit more, so we could have experienced their reactions to the gift! :) Great trilogy overall, and I am looking forward to more of your stories. |
| cartertwo 2007-06-25 ch 29, | abuseWoohoo - looks like first final review to me! Score. Brilliant. Absolutely loved it. Cut Woolsey off at the knees - check. Bett related to Nox - check. Removal of Ancient knowledge from Jack's brain equals futzing with Bett's memory stamp - check. Jack and Sam snuggly goodness - check. Daniel and Teal'c are evil - heh - check. Now on to Torment? Greedy, I am... You're the best, Karen! |
| dietcokechic 2007-06-24 ch 27, | abuse"Hope you didn't hate the "Learned by Heart Montage"..." Lol. As a writer, I thought it was brilliant! As a reader, it helped me remember what had happened to Jack and Sam all those months (many!) ago. Still not sure what Jack is going to do, but I can't wait to find out. I adore your writing Karen. Can't wait for more. |
| bigguy204 2007-06-24 ch 28, | abuseWell, well - it's the end of an era... And what a great era it was! I absolutely love this trilogy of yours and the way you ended things is no exemption. Sure, it's sappy to no end, but you've always had the tendency to go for emotions and not for action. I really liked the way you brought Bett back into the story and how you summed up what led to her being needed in the first place. Very well written story, thank you for investing all the time and effort in completing it! |