hahaha cute! and funny!

LOL this is well done!

I don't particularly like the SM series but I still like what you did with this story.

OMG! lol, i like this, I guess Tuxedo Lock prolly was Locke. Lolz, this was cute, KUGW!9keep up the good work!)
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Lol! Hey, you should make another chapter of this! :) I really like this! Make Terra be like Sailor Mars or something! Like her fire attack be something like: Inferno Star... Or Phoenix Call, where she summons the Bird of the Element of Fire, you know. :)

Ah, please? Chocolate ice cream with sparkly fudge covering on it? Please? Yummy! I want some chocolate now! :)

Oh! Make Relm be like, Sailor Chibi Chibi! Or whatever her name is, not Rini, but another little girl in Sailor Moon, yet to be released in English dub. :D

"Sailor Celestial"? "Tuxedo Locke"? How corny can you get? BWAHAHAHA! It was hilarious! BWAHAHAHA! (Yes, I am mentally unstable) BWAhAHAHAHA! (Cheese smells good!) BWAHAHAHAHA! But seriously.I think it's well written, but the Idea is so abstract, I would think that it would be difficult to really pan out.

Try to portay Terra as Sailor Mars because she can use fire and her ablites are greatly increased in her Esper form. Her attacks will be Maduin Fire Star Surround and Fire Star Wave Ignite. She can read the fire of the Espers to show signs of what will happen.

Weird... I don't know what to think about it but it gave me an idea! Thanks!

Heh heh that was cute. I like the idea as Mog playing Luna!

I generally don't care too much for crossovers, and I'm not into Sailor Moon, but this was cute. You write very sweet stuff. I always like your characterizations of Locke because I also see him as deep and heroic, even if a little excitable. I'm not sure why so many writers make him such a shallow oaf. "Celes, if you follow your heart, you will always be ok." In my version of this world, he would have learned that from his mother. *grins* Nice job on this little story.

Well, um, I'm not really a big fan of Sailor Moon... but this was fun. Wrong, but... fun. Good job. Heeeey... if your pen name is Celes Chere, does this count as selfinsertion? ;-P

LMAO. That was sooooo funny. I just started watching Sailor Moon about a month ago and my god it's screwed up. Tuxedo Lock....Hehe. Very cute.