I really like legolas but he sort of deserved it

well it is very very very very good please write more

~Al

I do not ususally review the first chapter of a story but hell this is GREAT I love it already.

Great story! Nice and creative, good writing as well. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Ah, I know how you feel. This semester is me, too. -_- Who ever invented education must DIE.

But I'm hanging with you all the way! ;) Just remember to take this chapter down after a while so the story doesn't get kicked off or something. I hope everything goes well! Ta!

This seems good. PAMS

Loved it! Absolutely loved it!

~The Lady of Light~

What an original find! So seldom do I find such a gem- and of the Haradrim too! This was a wonderful read, I wish you would continue!

~The Lady of Light~

Aaw, this is nice. Keep going!

Very good first chapter! Very moving! So far I like Asano, and I like the history you're giving her and the cultural things that you're adding in...great job! I can't wait to read more!

such a good chapter.
i cant wait until another one is up.
i hope it comes soon.

This is great stuff! Creative and well-written.

Great chapter, i loved the last scene, very philosophical, but not in a cliche way, cant wait to read future updates!

*elf hugs and kisses*
Laivine

I really like your story! I've thought about the Haradrim and was thinking about writing something but never got around to it! I really like it! Please continue!

I really enjoy this story! I have always wanted to know more about the Haradrim, and this story is a wonderful outlet for that.

The author uses wonderful descriptions of her characters and develops them well. As long as the author keeps posting, i'll keep reading!