baffleing your reviewers isn't always a bad thing, if someone is confused they may continue reading inorder to figure out just what's going on. It seems like you're trying to be vauge with your narration in an atempt of "Narritive Art" let me tell you that this techneaqe(sp?) doesn't work. Also with 5 chapthers and only 792 word... something is lacking. but other than that it's a fine fic. But one again I would sugest finishing one before starting another 51.

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good fic

What the hell? I like it , but longer chapters that make an ounce of sense would be ideal.

o_O must. see. next. chapter! :)

Your writing style is quite interesting. It's simple and is easy to understand. It would be nice to have longer chapters but I suppose that is up to you. Thank you for explaining the Kaoru-dono part, it was truly confusing at the time. I still can't find much humour in the chapters though. Perhaps you should change the genre to romance/mystery? Your summary is also rather vague, but I really enjoyed the first two lines starting the story. Try and shed more light in the next few chapters, please. Good luck with future chapters.

I like it! unfortunetly I agree with a lot of the other reveiwers, longer chapters!

Okay! Write more ASAP please! :-)

O.k. still making no sense. Longer chapters would be ideal. Who the heck is kidnapping Kaoru this time?

Okay, I still don't quite get what you are trying to imply. Kaoru has never met Kenshin before and yet she seems to know him? He comes to rescue her from her would be kidnapper that tied her up to the wall and uses the same honorifics as Kenshin? Goodness, my head is really muddled. Your chapters are rather short, too short for comfort if you don't mind me saying. Your sentences seem reasonably constructed though they shed very little light as to the true point of the story. Also, I don't really see much humour anyhere. Please try to lengthen your chapters, perhaps shed a bit more light as to where this story is headed (since I don't see a clear storyline) and best of luck with future chapters.

Ack! Another cliffy! :( More soon please! :)

Cliffhanger! Longer chapters please! :) Looking good! _

? o_O post more!

What the heck? Please add another chapter. I hate cliffhangers. ?: is this Kaoru, Misao or Megumi. I AM SO CONFUSED! I still like it