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I LOVE THIS FIC!
^_^

Allow me to collect a small group of fluffy orphan kitties to give you a chorus of "Aw"s.

Very cute.

nice job. it was short but sweet. i just love the ending, i have to say that it did me in. a great way to end a short piece. wonderful job! keep up the good work.

this so really good i wish it was long :( You should write more :)

"wet rage in" -- I think this is a typo.
Very sweet in a psycopathic killer kind of way.

this needs a sequel or more chapters. Or rather, i need it to have more chapters. nothing that good should be that short.

oh, I like that little drabble! I hope you do more!

So...I read 'Toleration' and now I'm in love with this short piece of work too. Geez, I'm just gonna have to add you to my Fav. Authors list, aren't I? Good authors are such a pain in the **...

so cute!

:D:D NICE!

very sweet fic

"ambition" hmm? I'm sure Yuya would appreciate being called that. *rolls eyes* You're doing an excellent job of capturing Kyo's somewhat juvenile perception of the world. Keep it up!

Salute!
The Narrator

Very charming fanfic. Interesting to boot and amusing in its own way. There were two sentences that could be rephrased to sound slightly better and there's a spelling mistakes hovering about the place. Good luck with future fics.

AW! that was so cute!I loved it great job!

Lovely! So, Yuya is Kyo ambition, huh... Lucky girl! Anyway, keep writing. You're good at these sweet little ficlets.