Very Good.

Wow! I just read your story, it was SO good! I can't wait to read the others!

I don't mean to be ruse but this story is very, very similar to another one I've read and its almost word for word except for some few distinctions; including but not limited to the medium used for travel though not the method, the charcter interactions, the instant attraction between Buffy and Remus--which is unbeliavable unrealistic by the way, Buffy becoming a student...wouldn't it be better if she was a teacher or better yet, part of the Order? As a student...I don't know, it just seems too easy, too neat of a choice for her to make and one I've seen many times over, unfortunately. One I'm getting really tired of, to be blunt. Anyway, I don't know if you got permission from the other author or by other unfavorable means or its just a coincidence or whatever, but I just thought you'd like to know before the admins get word of this...the plot is good, its just the way everythings been written is no different from the other fics I've read of this crossover.

this is going great. i love it. the quidditch game was terrific, especially sirius's commentating. james and lily are adorable, and buffy and remus are so freaking cute!! i must admit, however, to thinking sirius was being a bit of a creep after the last line of this chapter, about finding out eliza's secret. and seriously, what was eliza thinking asking for more details about the others' comments when she didn't want them to ask about hers? dumb girl...~

ack!! i forgot to review! i'm such a bad, bad person. i closed everything up, and then was checking my email when i realized i had no way to find this story again! i hadn't faved or reviewed or anything! so i managed to find my way back and am now doing so, so that i will be able to return and finish this story at a later date, because it is aMAZing. it's so cute. it's funny and sad. and remus is adorable. i love him so much. my favorite line is 'i'm a werewolf, can we date?'. i keep saying it. i haven't read much about the marauders, but i love them. remus is just great.
they've been decently in character so far, which is a terrific plus, and the story is believable. poor willow, though. she's so swamped. i feel bad for her. but she's managing, so that's great! and oz is a sweetie pie. i love oz.
anyway, enough of my randomness!! i will continue reading, but i have many things to do today.~

Great story - absolutely love BuffyRemus fanfics (they're my obsession)!

Although the story is finished, I still have one little thing I want to point out:
In chapter 16, you have the Room of Requirement producing chocolate for Remus. Although you probably weren't aware of this when you wrote it, the Room can't produce food, as stated in Deathly Hallows. I know it's a minor detail but still.

Other than that, excellent story and as soon as I've finished reading this, I'm gonna go read the sequels.

Great story!! :)

I loved it! i absolutly lurve Buffy-X-HP Xovers, and my favourites are most of the time when Buffy is one of the main characters. so obviously this was my cup of tea...(so to speak)
i cant say much more other than i loved it, coz its tru. i loved the whole 'buffy in the marauders timeline thing. and i loved that Buffy got with Remus he's such a great character! ok ill stop now, lol. im gonna go and read the sequel!! yay! more! ok thats it im done, lol. bye!

thanks,
Shaylee

Awesome awesome awesome story!!

love it


spikehalliwell

I loved this story. I haven't started the others yet but I have checked out your site. Aside from a couple errors I spotted it was incredibly well done. I'm in the middle of my own massive series so trust me when I say a few gramatical errors are nothing in the long run.

I don't know if you've considered it but you might want to socsider posting this story on Twisting the Hellmouth. I have a feeling you would get a great respose as there is a stroy that is fainly similar incilving Dawn that quite a few people seem to like and is not as well done as yours. Especially considering your manips and yearbook stuff.

My only advice is to try Twisting the Hellmouth. I've got my own massive LOTR series going and so far my respose has been amazing. I'd like to see this story (and the others as I am sure they are as good) get all the rexognition it deserves.


Keep up the good work. You've already gained one more fan.


Jeza

i like it! its very interesting!

This is really, really good, though i am hoping the fight scenes aren't too badly done. :p
anyway, i am pleasantly surprised to see the scoobies in this chapter, an i am wondering if they'll have any role to play in the future.

Good first chapter, though it's a bit sad that buffy just goes in the world like that withouth anybody else the wiser (meaning the scoobies)... my btvs favv character is Willow, so i am always kind of sad not to see her in a fic, though it's better than seeing her with spike :p
nice beginning, i hope the rest is well done, i'll review again in a few chapters, and hopefully it won't be too much of a criticism.

I feel like an incredibly annoying person to be nitpicking in the second chapter but there is quite a glaring error in your writing.

Scotland is definitely NOT part of England! Scotland is one of the four constituent countries that make up the UK (as well as some other much smaller islands in the surrounding seas.) Wales, Northern Ireland AND England are the other countries. The south of Scotland does share a land border with England however.

So '"Umm…is this England?" Buffy asked hesitantly, and Dumbledore smiled.

"Yes, it is, Scotland, in fact."' does sound quite silly and should probably be changed. [/rant]