I love it. It was really well written, and I love how you write while in first-person. The one thing is, I don't know who's eyes your looking out of but farther in I understand. You wrote from Riku's perspective very nicely. I think on Fanart-central I'll draw Riku's mom one day. She sounds pretty. I'll post on your profile on FAC.

~Nobody With A Heart~

(huggles) AW! This gives me a nice little warm feeling.
Riku's mom is so nice too. And it's just, Oh man it's so CUTE. (glomp)

I like it. I don't normally like sora but you made him so cutely innocent i couldn't help it!

I wouldn't continue. There isn't much else you can do unless you want to go into the actual game. I like the idea of Rikku having a normal homelife and not troubled. He just seemed bored, not that he hated his family or anything like that. Btw, what's up with your other fic (the mystery one)? Writer's block?

WHAT?! *looks for rest of story and glares lightly at author* You are so wrong for not making this story longer, you know that? But.. a nice RxS yaoi fic is nice, I loved this. Continue it PLEASE!