 Radon65 2009-09-19 . chapter 1That was good. You totally had me going on the Lupin's dead thing - I was freaking out, then thrilled to discover it was a dream, then freaking out again, then thrilled to discover it was a dream again! Good writing, nice characterization. An enjoyable piece. |
 Makalani Astral 2005-01-08 . chapter 1that was fantastic! |
 bluebird161221 2005-01-01 . chapter 1 I can't wait for you to write more stories. |
 duj 2005-01-01 . chapter 1Would work as a one shot or could be chapter 1 of an ongoing story.
Personally I felt Snape was entirely justified in outing Lupin, not because of anything to do with their past history but because the previous night Lupin had endangered both students and staff by forgetting to take his Potion. It was extremely irresponsible and demonstrated that Dumbledore's safety arrangements for the presence of a werewolf in a school were insufficient.
Lupin, through no fault of his own, becomes a potential predator every month. Just as you wouldn't allow a pedophile to teach in a school (It's illegal here in Australia; all teachers and disability workers have to submit to a background check) a person whose priority was protecting the children under his care wouldn't allow a werewolf in a boarding school during the danger times. |
 The Pigeon Masters 2005-01-01 . chapter 1 Zu der Schreibe,
Guten tag, je heisse der pijon meistere. Ca va? Ich suis gut. Deine Brief ist mal. Ich mochte sie nicht in der futare kommen. Gib ber ish. Au revoir.
der pijon meistere |