what you did is just wrong. this story should be updated, i mean it seems to be close to the end. why not just add those last few chapters and finish it off? anyway i enjoyed this story and i do hope to read more of it soon.

please update soon

Hope you update soon

NICE! Not a bad story! I love KIGO ^_^, but i wanna see more interaction between them! And i'm glad Shego finally is gonna help Kim, i hate it when she doesnt do anything :( Shego can do betetr than that! even if she does not have inhuman powers...except for her plasma powers...but SHE"S THE BEST! now now update this story of urs ONEGAI??! ^_^

love it pure gold if you want to or can, can check mine out you dont have to review though

you're doing well keep going it's certainly taken you a while but i think you're hitting your stride as far as the kigo is concerned

I like the update its real cool. I just hope Kim and Shego get together soon.

great chapter update soon

I've enjoyed your story so far. You have managed to keep a good balance between narrative/story and action. This is one of the few fics that has made me come back and want to carry on reading. Can't wait to read more, please update soon!

Very good, keep it up. I personally like that you take the Kigo slowly. Most authors jump right into it and seeing it come after a good deal of time is refreshing. The storyline in this story is interesting and new. The idea of Kim actually being a villian is very interesting and somehow believable. I do have to say though that it's a bit too confusing, although I think I might actually understand everything that has happened.

good update its neat. update soon.

cool update. I liked it, hope you do it again soon.

hey i love this story...its original and makes me want to keep reading...pls update soon...ur story is great!

Love the update, its cool. I like the fight scenes they're awesome. You are a great author hope you update soon.

Was this story supposed to be femslash? I like the story but I'm not reading awhole lot of kigo action in it. this was supposed to be a followup to holding cell right?