Poor Gollum, I feel so bad for him. ( I envy you, I can't write poems.

This is a good description of gollum.

Very good. I liked it. Sorry, I tend to write bad reviews.

I loved this poem it is so sad and sweet at the same time. You are a great poem writer so don't stop writing!

p.s. thanks for reviewing on my poem.

You have a great poem here. I love the last line :)