hey how could frieza be Yuske's mom when frieza's a guy I mean that would be unacceptable person! Geeze why don't cha ya do a damn google search ghod ididots! And I thoguht ZI was an idiot everyone knows that! Just to let you know.
The Amityville toaster make breakfast spooky, spooky talk from toaster, spooky eat me toast, yum yum yum human hand >3

Awsome fight! Update soon please! Ja ne!

WOW! Major update since last time. Update soon please! Ja ne!
Aldrea: Suuki, do you wish to have some chocolate cake?
Suuki: CHOCOLATE! *eats entire cake Aldrea was holding in one bite* YUM!
Aldrea: -_-;
Suuki: *begins blowing up random things* Ja ne couch! Ja ne roof!
Aldrea: No! Stop!
Suuki: *runs* MWUHAHAHAHAHA!!
Aldrea: *sigh* Namarie. *runs after her*

good chapter and story although it's a little badly written but not as bad as my stories.

ok so you know yusukes real heritige but kairi means light in japenise

You do my Murder Family proud dude lol. Awesome work so far, though the battle with Rinku oculd have been drawn out a little. Still, very good, you portrayed the emotions quite well ^_~

hehe the last line gave me shivers, verrah cool. Update soon! Or death by rubber piggies!

^_~ Hey there hon, stories looking good so far, can't wait to see what happens next. Glad your string of bad luck with seemed to have dissipated lol. Gald the story's sticking finally.

In any case, could you do me a little favor in the next chapter? Gimmie a disclaimer saying Karma, Kairi, and Kahn are mine? Just for ref? *hugs* I'd appreciate it!

In any case, I hope to see more soon, I'm eager to see how all the fights line up. Are you going to go through the whole tournament or just parts? Lemme know, later! ^__^

yo amazing story you do know about yusske's REAL herittige if you dont ask me and I can tell you also hiei is not human oh yeah the time chamber's time moves slower one day = 1 year in the chamber

This is awsome ! Please write more soon !

lol. that was good. why don u add in the rest of the team. (Touya, Kurama, Jin, Chu, etc.)

it be so much better. lol i really lik yyh

I've obviously missed something. CURSE COMPUTER RESTRICTION DURRING THE BREAK! Anyway, great job. Update soon please.