Ouch ... the ending just made me say Ouch and AWW over and over and over again i can't belive that that happened at the end with the semi parallel univers type thing. when he killed him self me and my friend were like WHAT! Any way you are one crazy fantastic author with a mind for really good writing. I REALLY wish that yami and yugi always stay together forever and ever and ever. YOU ROCK

I love this story ^^

SPOILERS FOR END. IF YOU HAVEN'T FINISHED YET LOOK AWAY UNLESS YOU WANT TO RUIN THE WHOLE THING!


Sorry. Sometimes I look at reviews to decide what on my list to read I want to read first and the end is so amazing I didn't want to ruin it.
Anyways. Loved the story! I thought it was VERY well writen and interesting and the only problem was that some of the chapters were really long. That's not really a problem I just prefer short ones... Anyways. I think the end was the most ingenius thing EVER. It was so damn depressing I just want to go cry for a few hours. Not... that'd I'd do that or anything... Part of what made it so amazing is that I wasn't expecting it. Let's face it, on FanFiction most people don't write sad endings. The good guys always win. And the best part is that in yours they did... until the very end where they all die... it reminds me of a book I read where the whole book was about trying to keep this one daughter alive and then in the end the other died in a car crash. Yours was better than that even.
Anyways, LOVED IT!

Okay, this fic was great and awesome and totally kicked **...

Up until the end.

I loved it, up until that part. How Yugi died... still kind of confuses me. If that was all an illusion... oh. Well, maybe I get it, but... yeah...

*sigh* I'm sorry. It was great, but the ending seems... unfulfilling. I guess I really was looking forward to a happy ending. I figured Yugi would wake up in the hospital and that the whole thing at the end - the illusion of his friends leaving him behind - was the real trial.

Meh. It was good. You write very well (I saw some spelling errors and a few words you accidentally left out, but no biggie), and your plot is very good. I just need... happiness. Heh. I guess I'm just a little ** off at Fate. She should be kinder to poor Yugi. He's lost so much. Couldn't she have graced him with but one small wish...

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

so sad and lonely i wanna cuddle him too

no, i think it is called 'whisper of the heart'. there's another movie, supposedly a prequel called 'the cat returns'. baron humbert von gikkingon, or something like that.

this story reminds me a lot of "My Feline Gentleman", a cat returns fic. one of my all-time favorites, i might add.

and i think the word you're looking for is 'exasperation'.

Hyper

...did Yuugi turn into a doll...?

Still a great story! I loved reading it!

Okay, let me get this straight. Yugi killed himself and now he and Atemu are together forever. I was really confused at the end. I thought it was one of Yugi's tests in this chapter. Oh well. I worshiped this story! Please write more stories!

So when Yugi stabbed the doll he killed himself and turned into a doll as well? I don't get it.

I would love to read more, but I have to be somewhere tomorrow. I'll have to finish reading then.

this is so gonna be good! this is so gonnac be good! this is so gonna be good! i love the games in stories! bye!

omg! this sounds like a really good story! i wander what's gonna happen... really 3 chaps, ne? 8! but that's no problem! not at all... i love long stories but it can take me long to read like yami no game... i'm reading it for 2 days and i'm yet at chap 10 i'll read till 20 today and than there're 13 or 12 châps laft. (sigh) i love this chapter! bye!

eh? I don't get it. How come they all ended up back in Domino, and everyone forgot about Yugi and stuff? so Yugi killed himself? and at the end is Sugoroku, not Yugi? and how did he know about Atemu. oh and you kept saying died, in stead of dead. other than that, it's pretty good. the ending was a bit unexpected, i thought they would end up together =( poor yugi.

i like it. very cute fic. and the chapters a nice and long, sometimes too long...but that's just me. i couldn't help but notice though, there's quite a few mistakes. like you wrote flirted instead of fluttered, and graduations, when i think you mean congratualtions. and some other things. i think you should get a beta, then your fics will be even better =)

The story was beautiful, but the ending...argh, why did it have to be sad? I hate sad endings! (sniffle) Must go cry now...
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