I liked this, a lot. It touches on some of the most important themes of DiR, and you have a very sophisticated voice. Well done.

Very nice. I love the selection of characters ... I love the premise of the story. The juxtaposition of the clock and immortality - excellent.
Great story, really. Short, but it's most effective this way.

I liked it very much. Well written and meloncholy. Just perfect for the mood I'm in right now. ^_^

Anyway, that was an excellent piece of work.

Happy.. em.. two weeks after New Years

that was sad-ish. :c what was Merriman thinking about, I wonder.

anyway, happy new year!