Oh Krad...Oh Krad...

love it!

It's strange to be seeing Krad as a sweetheart. I mean, usually when I think of him, I think of him grinding a sword through Dark's shoulder and saying silkily, "Does that hurt? I thought so." This is really good, and I'm glad I decided to take my friend's recommendation and read it.

man, i was half expecting daisuke to find krad at the store. would have messed up the story, true, but it would have been damn funny, don't you think?

and once again you've done amazing work with expanding on krad and their past together. (i haven't seen the anime, so i don't really know about the academy.) really it's very believable, not only does it explain who they 'were' now, but it also helps with who they're becoming, shows how little they truly know each other.

wow, this is so good i couldn't stop reading, but this chappie deserves a comment! getting to see not only krad's changes, but his side of the fight is beautiful. even with so little of him canon-wise, he's still believable even with the changes. i loved that he was reading the notes that morning. he's so submissive but still so... i don't know if obedient is the right word. and the bluffs, almost spilling to dark was hilarious! satoshi's little smile was so precious too!(okay, how sick am i now?)

and the schoolyard fight is perfect! i could really see daisuke reacting like that.

wow.. Such a great story, simply. Very well written. ;w;
It was touching and really nice to read, I have to admit that I cried a bit in the end. ^^ ;
I loved how the story went on slowly and you didn't rush it. You have a talent of writing! ^__^

In a half way of reading I noticed you had finished it like 4 years ago! o.o It was a bit shock because I have been a DNAngel fan since god know when and I haven't seen your story before. (maybe I'm just blind ._.'' time to get better glasses~ )

Anyway, thank you for the wonderful story. ^^

This is absolutely amazing! You're really good (but I guess you already know that^^) Anyway, great work! I enjoyed reading it

This was beyond amazing! So magnificent, yet so sad... I hope you make sequel to this wonderful piece of art!

such a sad ending...i almost cried T-T

Guren
-Gazette

"i dont want you to fade
let me hear, even a sigh
a small heartbeat, that isnt there
i want you come here!"

this was playing while i was reading...kinda fit if you ask me

you needs to work on your conjugating!
Hikari Krad sum!
. . . that means Hikari Krad am. which makes no sense...
“Ego, Hikari Krad, e Koku Yoku, ex Arte natus; perfectio genus meum est!”
'meum est'
you can't use those two together, because 'est', while it means 'is' can only be used with he, she, or it. you need to use 'es'
can't really read everything...didn't learn all those words, but it looks like it wasn't conjugated correctly.

if i had the translation into english (so i could find out the the usage of the words) i could tell you what it should say

(can't believe i'm even able to remember this much from last year...)

the waltzing thing made me think of this...
http://crystilmitsuru./art/Takeshi-s-Many-Faces-Pg-1-45893973
http://crystilmitsuru./art/TMF-Pg-2-45894234
(two page comic)

I'll see what Frau (Mrs in German)
has to say about your translation!
lawlz just kidding. (i wish i could say something about it, but i'm only in German 1...)

but i do question your latin from one of the other chapters...
i think you conjugated the nouns wrong. if you got it off of an online translator, no wonder. they don't conjugate...
i just find it hard to believe that all the words were 3rd conjugation nouns (cuz only they would end in em)
i'm not positive cuz i never learned those words, but if i had the original i could conjugate it...
*still has last years notes* ^^

yaoi time plz?

how appropriate...Burial Applicant was playing and before Hiwatari Kei died, Ruki was singing "die die die..."
and then at the end, he was singing "You can't even love a child..."

also...
YOU ARE AMAZING!
your, like, the master of all fanfiction...
*respectful bow*