Silent Hill 2 was a fantastic game, the best in the series, I think. You really captured James POV very well in this short, he was always, for me personally, one of the most tragic figured out of all the characters.

By the way, don't mean to pimp here but just an FYI since you wanted to know: I updated "Once a Thief", if you are still interested XD

You are my hero.

And so history shall repeat itself, an impossable to break chain looped around back to it's beginning, never to be destroyed, man shall fail, and man shall fail again...

Great story.

Nice, truly!

I like how you went from the beginning to the end. It was talent, pure talent, I tell you!

I think you captured the events between James and Mary/Maria very well indeed. I don't know anyone who has done it better!

Hey,

I like it, its very good! Its like reading a flashback of James's life. Very cool!

karry

This is sick and brilliant. I almost stopped reading because I thought it was yet another godforsaken Sue, but I'm so glad I kept going. Subtle foreshadowing (especially the coughing) works wonderfully here, and it implies a cycle of destruction that doesn't stop here. Excellent work.

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very good, sometimes hard to concentrate on where you are but i guess thats my problem ;P are you going to continue with this? it sounds quiet good although has james killed her and is that mary? and if so why is she in the next paragraph or is that just someone else as she is refered to as "the girl" ? s very confuzzeled but i always am...