cool!

...are you ever gonna write more? just make it text, not html

ooh good!

yeah, i cant get that chrono cross one up cuz my computers screwed...

i dont normally read drama fics but this was good

That was good! Can't wait for part two! You, the complaint, know. Bye!

Thisn is okay, but I like some of the other chapters better. Know the complaint. Later!

Still good. The complaint. See ya.

Still getting better! That is really it. Know the complaint. Cya!

This is getting better! One little mistake: You spelled Crono wrong. Its spelled C-R-O-N-O not C-H-R-O-N-O. The game is spelles Chrono, not his name. You know the complaint. Later!

Humm. Don't really have much to say. I don't really know what to rate this. My complaint is "Sort by Author" catorgory be put back up. See ya!

So...umm..yeah. Interesting. I can't wait to see more!

A better question than 'Why'...How is she calling out to organic beings?

Interesting. It's getting better with each chapter.

AARGHHH! CLIFFHANGER ALERT! Great job, and i can't wait to see Crono and Marle reunite.