My eyes watered the whole time...

~IGC t DM

A fascinating, sense-rich interlude. I like the idea of a place totally free from work, and Grissom's quite natural doubts...and I want to go find the place and vacation there myself. :) Nicely done.

Ooh. I love it!

We all need a hide way place, real or not, get through life. Thanks.

Nice.

Aww, this is such a cute little story. I enjoyed it immensely.

Cute story! I love it!

I'm still sorely lacking in anything flattering to say ... just know that I want to flatter your story, ok? That's good enough, right? Oh, yeah, it's going on my favorites :)