OMG! that was soo..wow..wicked..sghort but wicked!

I said I would look at it eventually... Very nicely written, you evoke the feelings and images so well.

GOD THAT WAS GOD! IM CRYING!

ouch. oo;;. very good. -Jess

Oh my, that was quite chilling. Poor Ami :(

Oh my! That was interesting! Very well written! :)