Oh, this is good! Please, please update again soon! I wanna know what happens next!

Wowie. This is really getting good. Very suspensful. I love it.

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Hmm...this is rather interesting. You seem to be on a homicidal streak, though, heh, killing first Annie (even I didn't have the balls to do that) and then this new character's father. I'm curious to see what happens next, what this fancy alexandrite locket does, whats going to go on. You keep writing, I'll keep reading.

SJ

I just found your story and I'm loving it. Your characterizations are decent and the plot is rolling along quite smoothly.

My only complaint- well, nit-picky, englsh-teachery trait would be spellcheck. There are only a few (few, mind you) spelling errors throughout the three chapters and while they do not detract from the story itself, they are distracting. And so easily fixed.

Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter. GOOD JOB!

Lady of Light

Great first few chapters! I hope you keep this up. Can't wait to see how she tries to get her revenge. Update soon!

Revenge is so very very sweet! PLEASE CONTINUE! I'll give you a cookie.

OOHH! That was written really well. It is so great keep it up!

Aw,that sucks :(

But, I do love the newfound fury :)

Please please update.. I love this! Already! LOL!

Ohh, her father makes me so sad. He just gives off some depressing vibes. Poor guy. And I wonder what he was so ruffled about. Weird. Good job.

Excellent so far, I'm definately curious. We *always* need more Collateral fan ficition! :D

Good job. Definitely haven't seen anyone go this way in a Collateral story yet and I like it.

That was really good please continue.