This is probably gonna sound sadistic... But I think you should write another chapter- one where Draco dies. I don't know why, I just think this fic needs it.

OH MY GOD!
I THINK IM GOING TO CRY!

And when Harry returns from work... I'm shattered!

AWW...yet it all seams a bit awkward..

Well, not only do you have a knack for a good parody, you can write angst aswell! I am in awe, nice job on this one too.

I like the dynamic you put between Harry and Draco. There is certainly a colassial amount of h/d fics out there, but you put your own twist on thier relationship. Can I just ask why in the world Draco is dying? Presuming there is no more to this sotry, and it is purley a one-shot, shouldn't he be happy with Harry?

Anyway, nice job, sometimes the best stories have open endings.

In awe and drooling slightly,

Tsuvi

AWW!! damn HARRY!!
Pretty fic *pats fic*

Sweet yet normal sounding.

Considering Draco didn't die in this chapter, I'm guessing it's not over, so, as it's been A MONTH since you updated, could we have the next instalment? Also, could we please NOT have a dead Draco on our hands? Please! *puppy dog eyes*

Love Chibi AlaniaX

wait what? why does draco want to die? a bit confusing there, but it is beautifully written. i can just feel the emotions perfectly. lovely job!!

This story seems dramatic and sad!
What would Draco thinking? I mean He had Harry with him,right? he supposed to be happy! very happy!

Plz soon soon soon!

Too short, otherwise good!
Hey, theres a sequal to the ring coming out...that means u have 2 write a sequal of 7 days! HAHAHAHA, im so persuasive XD

interesting...

aw. It's short and sweet. I like it. Anyway i can't wait for more!

um...uh...i...ok,what the..?! ok,you do not explain much!it was interesting, you explained well their actions and the looks on their faces (very good!) but, i don't get it! why did draco decide to die?what was their relationship?what kind of a challenge did you reply to?i think you should write more, you ARE going to, yes? it would be great if you wrote more chapters!overall,it was good, very good!

I love it. If you ignore that this is Harry we are talking about here (as I don't really see him leaving someone to die), this is really awesome. I don't usually give criticism, but I will suggest that you at least put that he smiles hesitatingly or something in the end. The only ones who smile at death are the ones who are facing it...usually. This isn't really all criticism though. I'm sorry I'm making it sound like it. It isn't. I honestly love this piece. (Wow. Too long of a review for something so short.)