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Unbidden-Angel
2009-01-25 . chapter 3
I really loved it! Poor Kyo. I hope he gets better. Please continue?
Homunculi_rule_all
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
Cool story and good writing! Kind of ceepy though lol. I was wondering, do you read the original manga? If you don't, you should! It makes the anime look like a really dumb five year old wrote it. The creator of the manga was really angry they ruined her work.
*Spoilers*- Akito is a women; wierd I know. Yet strangely interesting. Yuki reveals that he was looking for a mother in Tohru the whole time. So now I get creeped out when people pair them together.(You still make them cute). And Hatsuharu/Haru is in love with the horse Zodiac Rin, whose a girl *surprise surprise.*(Their love is awesome, and Rin is one of the best characters in the series.)
JuniorsObligatory
2007-12-30 . chapter 3
UPDATE O.O..
Kado
2007-08-10 . chapter 3
Oh! Please continue! It's great!
Kira Temeki
2007-04-30 . chapter 3
hey..*poke poke* are you going to update this story, or is it dropped? cause kira really likes it..kira wants to read more, so please update!! ^__^

~*Kira*~
New Dragon Rider
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
1. In the anime, Akito is genderless, though with a male emphasis.
In the manga, Akito is revealed to be a female.
It just depends what you like, really...

2. Kyo=English spelling.
Kyou=Japanese spelling.

3. Cat, Rat, Ox, etc. is only capitalized when you are talking to the person. ex: "Eat your dinner, Cat." (talking to Kyo) or "Where's that cat gone?" (talking about Kyo)
Ketsueki-Ken
2007-04-17 . chapter 3
MY GOD! This is so freaking awesome! I love it! Kyo is my favorite character so I love seeing him get hurt! I await your next update!
Lisha wants an update *mew*
2007-01-15 . chapter 3
So this is my Thanksgiving present to you. :D If you’d like to submit a review it’d make my Turkey Day :P Hope you liked the chapter and I’m going to seriously try to update within three months next time. :D

three months!?!? please update ^^
SpiritWeaver
2006-06-29 . chapter 3
This is really good. That thing you did with the cats was creative. I'm glad Yuki got there in time. Can't wait for your next update!
SpiritWeaver
2006-06-29 . chapter 2
No...not Akito!

I really like how you write this and use the Japanese words, but what does "Tadashi" mean? I also like how you capture the chacters really well. Good job!

Congrats on your Dramione winner fic things.
SpiritWeaver
2006-06-28 . chapter 1
this is cool! Akito gives me the chills ::shiver::
Kira Temeki
2006-06-04 . chapter 3
you know...i'm sad. it's been forever since you updated! T_T will you be updating anytime soon? Kira really ikes your story! so please please please please please please please please please please PLEASE update!! ^_^

kira beggin you!! T_T

anyways, update soon, kk? Thankies and good luck!!

~*Kira*~
star
2006-02-25 . chapter 3
ah! i feel so sorry for kyou! >< update soon. =]
um well yeah
2006-01-26 . chapter 3
I hope you update soon!
VanillaWhisper
2006-01-11 . chapter 3
Omg, this story made me cry. Poor Kyou! T_T UPDATE SOON!
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