Reviews for Does Your Soul Define Who You Are

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nomad003 2008-05-01 ch 32,	abuselove the story. don't listen to those people who make fun of your grammer or your age. honestly, i don't think age defines a great writter their work speaks for them. and the fact you deslexia mild or not and do what you do makes you all the better. great story once again keep it up.
Nimal De Silva 2008-04-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseI know its been sometime since you've written these stories, but I hope u'll get to read this. Personally, I love the work, it's no big matter that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there... it was probably overlooked in the excitement of the moment when writting. Most important I believe is to see the movie of the story in ur own mind as the eyes pick up the words written. Not to use the eyes to constantly look for mistakes and things to critise. So, please ignore the nay sayers and angry grumpy people who've never had anything nice to say, but complain and whine about everything. Please do consider writting more stories. I hope to read more about the Yautja. Best Regards Nimal De Silva Singapore
joseph 2008-01-08 ch 32, anon.	abusethis is a very cool storie i like how emma and jeuki got together.And how oni jui and oran got there just punishment a realy nice touch.I hop the next fanfic i read of this mini series is as good or beter.
MonarqueMyste 2007-09-06 ch 31,	abuseHey there! Sorry it has been a while since I last did a review. I have been battling 2 children and just recently inherited a 3rd (my finace's son). We also just moved into a new house and things have been rather choatic around here. But, overall, things have been good. I have just recently added a new story and one of these days I plan on finishing the others but until then, I will keep reading and reviewing until my inspiration returns. I love this chapter and it was veyr well written. You can definetly see how close Emma and Jeuki are getting and I think it is wonderful. Also, thanks for your message down at the bottom. BIG CYBER HUGS!
Barranca 2007-08-06 ch 32,	abuseI wish there was a movie like this :P This is truly a masterpiece. Thanks for putting all that effort into it!
Barranca 2007-08-06 ch 14,	abuseThis story is brilliant, your character development is great and the action is really up there. I'm rooting for Jeuki and Emma :)
James3632 2007-04-12 ch 32, anon.	abusei really love your story. ive been reading it nonstop for the past week and i don't want it to end! Please make another one of emma and jeuki's adventures i love your characters so much!
Anzer'ke 2007-04-09 ch 25,	abuseuber awesome story dude, a friend of mine is also dislectxic (i spelled that wrong didn't i) and he gets really ** of when people make fun of him etc. try not to repeat words and phrases to often, never ever stop writing this gold.
Sky66 2007-03-26 ch 32,	abuseHi, I finished this fanfic. 2-4 days ago and started on your sequal. Would like to say that you are doing a great job, but your grammer and some spelling is off. Though I do notice less mistakes in the later chapters. Good luck with the sequal and keep updating for I'm starving for another chapter. Update soon! -Sky66
Grim Bonez 2007-02-02 ch 32, anon.	abuseWO HO What a story I loved it! My only question is did you notice that instead of saying US you said AS? Sorry if my spelling is off I am a bit tired. Cant wait to print your story. Luv Grim
Danielle 2007-01-18 ch 32, anon.	abuseI just want you to know that I think your story is absoluetly awesome! I love the descriptiona nd absoluetly adore Jeuki and Emma! I love how you have portrayed both of their characters and I love the plot and all the time you have spent. You have completely taken in the hwole universe of the aliens and predators and made it very beliveable, especially be incorporating Ripley, Alexa Woods etc. in mention. You have stayed true to the universe and have also given it your own personal flare. Bravo to you! The descritpions an dbattle seens were brilliant and original, and the punishmnet for orana and the other predator was so scary, I was freake dout just by reading it. Great job you have done amazing. Good luck with everything else that you may do!
Rachel Perkins 2007-01-05 ch 31, anon.	abuseDude i toataly loved your story! the whole thing was great and i really think you should keep going with it. there is absolutly nothing wrong with the whole thing.
Rachel Perkins 2007-01-04 ch 11, anon.	abusewow! that was very surprising! i really cant belive it. i love your stories!
koshka 2006-08-28 ch 10, anon.	abuseRe: ch 10 An important reason why I love predators are these fundamental differences in values from the worst of humanity. This makes perfect sense and I'm gratified that I'm not the only one who feels this way. I'm enjoying your story very much. Thank you!
Muse of Scrolls 2006-07-29 ch 31,	abuseYou will have to forgive me for not submitting an earlier review. I really wanted to take in your entire story before reviewing. ^_^ I must say, yours is a very impressive, powerful story...although by the length, one would call it more like an epic. The development of Emma and Jeuki's relationship through the first chapters was incredible and believable. It makes the following ones even more believable. Also, I just loved watching them interact together and with other people (be they human or Yautja). I appreciate having the chance to read your story, and I thank you for writing it. ^_^ Keep at it.

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