Oni jui must die! Love your story by the way

I want wristblades too!

Yah no more rain sorry if I freaked u out with the hail part but the weather here was nasty

Holy ** it's rainig outside agh hail run for your life

Great story! whoa whoa crap sugar high again

I love this story god I am obsessed about it

I want a bow and arrow 2!

Damn yautja traitor! He ruins the good name of the predators num!

Me likey (drooping at the thought of predators because they are so dam hot

Do the xenomorphs care? we must look at there species to determain this. They are born as small chestbursters, which molt into an adult. This gives no time for learning, no time for valued experences. They are immediatly thrust into a world of violence, of harsh survival. If they were allowed to learn, to grow and to thrive without the worry of death at every turn, we can only assume that they would learn to experiance such things as emotion. For example, the alien queen in Aliens lived longer than her counterpart in AVP. She learned to operate the elevator and how to cut the facilities power.

When I started reading this story I wasn't sure if it was worth my time, however I'm pleased to say that I was wrong. It takes a little to long to get going for my taste, but once it does it is quite an enchanting read. The concept that Emma finds a life that makes money obsolete was very well developed on many levels. The level of detail in describing such a simplistic, if brutal change of her lifestyle was a refreshing concept, one that seems to be lacking in this world. How you protrayed Emma's opionions on humanity and their foolhardy want of putting a price tag on everything and controlling it for their means, even though it is always uncontrollable is a continuing theme of the Alien franchise and I am quite impressed that in your story you have developed it to such a fine degree.

If I was a filmmaker I would be discussing to employ you to write a script based on this story, as I would think it would be award winning. I have enjoyed reading this story several times and I have saved it via Word to add it to my library so that I may enjoy it at any time.

My hat's off to you Silvermoonlight. This is a rare and enjoying story, I suppose that you have spent alot of time perfecting it and you have put a certain degree of passion which I can feel from its words (whether or not this was intentional I don't know but regardless I feel it). All In all It is one of the most well developed story I have seen thus far for the Alien/Predator Section and Indeed it is one of the stories I hold in high regard.

Your's Thankfully

TheBushman

love the story. don't listen to those people who make fun of your grammer or your age. honestly, i don't think age defines a great writter their work speaks for them. and the fact you deslexia mild or not and do what you do makes you all the better. great story once again keep it up.

I know its been sometime since you've written these stories, but I hope u'll get to read this.

Personally, I love the work, it's no big matter that there are some grammatical mistakes here and there... it was probably overlooked in the excitement of the moment when writting. Most important I believe is to see the movie of the story in ur own mind as the eyes pick up the words written. Not to use the eyes to constantly look for mistakes and things to critise.

So, please ignore the nay sayers and angry grumpy people who've never had anything nice to say, but complain and whine about everything. Please do consider writting more stories. I hope to read more about the Yautja.

Best Regards
Nimal De Silva
Singapore

this is a very cool storie i like how emma and jeuki got together.And how oni jui and oran got there just punishment a realy nice touch.I hop the next fanfic i read of this mini series is as good or beter.

Hey there! Sorry it has been a while since I last did a review. I have been battling 2 children and just recently inherited a 3rd (my finace's son). We also just moved into a new house and things have been rather choatic around here. But, overall, things have been good. I have just recently added a new story and one of these days I plan on finishing the others but until then, I will keep reading and reviewing until my inspiration returns. I love this chapter and it was veyr well written. You can definetly see how close Emma and Jeuki are getting and I think it is wonderful. Also, thanks for your message down at the bottom. BIG CYBER HUGS!