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| belle.nisce 2006-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god, I'm almost crying. I think I'll make up for the other, too-long review (Forget Midgar) and give a significantly shorter one. Usually I don't like fics that sum up things that have already happened, but this one is much more in her perspective than anything else. Aerith seems very human here, if you know what I mean, with girlish longings and emotions above everything else. Beautifully written, and deserving of praise. You're talented. |
| Teioh 2005-10-15 ch 1, | abuseNice... Hmm... You should do a story about her not leaving... or maybe someone with the sense to push Aeris out of the way? |
| Selunchen 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abusebeautiful, nothing else... I hate that aeris have to die... poor cloud... great story^^ |
| Looly 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely stunning! I love how you describe things, as they really do seem like how Aeris would think. I always thought slightly different from this, but your point of view is really interesting--and I think I agree with that more, now. Heh. Anyway, AWESOME, I love how you wrote this, and please, PLEASE write more Clorith fics! |
| Lukyirish12 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was gorgeous! Wow... :sob sob: |
| Evil Mina 2005-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI like your writing. Some parts were a bit slow, but you really developed Aeris' feelings well (and you can spell!). I lean towards Cloti, but it doesn't matter what couples a fic has as long as it is well-written. It's a good concept(though I always thought that Aeris went to pray for Holy without knowing that she was going to her death, but that's just a matter of opinion). |
| Clorith 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, my, that was beautiful. ^__^ I really loved this, it was so bittersweet. I guess that's what Cleris stories do to you: bring a smile to your face but a tear in your eye. You're a terrific author, so I beg of you, please write more Cleris fics. ^__^ |
| Tacofoolio 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful, nicely done. |
| Crystal Snowflakes 2005-01-03 ch 1, | abuse...this was really beautiful. I liked how you described Aeris' emotions and such, especially what she feels for Cloud. :) Great job! |