hahaha i loved it! great job it was so different i have never read anything like this before great job! =D

"Oh..." there could not have been a more perfect response
i loved this story it was cute and funny

I liked it alot. It was funny.

OMG, that was great. Loved it. Too funny.

Didn't hate it. Kinda wished there was more though. 'Twas amusing.

LMAO! I couldn't stop laughing! =D Good work!

That's some imagination you've got, but it was a good way to spend ten minutes. ;-)

lol that was cool it should have gone on longer though

lol. kinda cheesy, but it was funny.
but,in response to Fighting-this-War
>>STARTED: 11:34PM June 26, 2002
FINISHED:12:34AM June 27, 2002 (Whoa, thats strange, it took me exactly an hour to finish this! Cool< Actually from that piece of info, it took you a day and an hour :)

no it didn't. one minute after midnight signifies another day, and so it turns to AM. so if she started writing this at 11:34 PM, and she writes for an hour, she has crossed the midnight mark - therefor, it's a different day. so yeah, she did only write for one hour.
~vivian

>>STARTED: 11:34PM June 26, 2002

FINISHED:12:34AM June 27, 2002 (Whoa, thats strange, it took me exactly an hour to finish this! Cool<

Actually from that piece of info, it took you a day and an hour :)

Anyway it's a little OOC and no what i normally read but its funny.