I like this story. You have did a good job of describing Gandalf's feelings.

this was really good it reminded me alot of the poem that i wrote for my literary magazine

ill submit it some time good job i cant really see any thing to change

*wide smile* Very cool. Original plot, too- And not slashy! GREAT!

that was so cool! I loved that poem, and really showed what i think, at any rate, how gandalf feels for frodo...not that way, of course!

PHE