This. was. awesome.

great story!, i actually did a similar story but it was a songfic to "sorry" by buckcherry, but your song fits PERFECTLY!

That was wonderful, not to mention you used the lyrics very well.

Oh, that's so sad. It's wonderful though. Especially the part where he leaves. I think everyone was in exactly the right pose and doing exactly the right thing. The song intensifies the emotions too. It's great.

I love it. I like Percy fics. I don't no why really.

This is a really nice, well-done story. I think you captured Percy's thoughts and feelings very accurately. It's very in line with the character, and very believable. I love his final revelation at the end-and why he didn't go to see Arthur in the hospital.

Keep writing!

I'm actually very surprised no one has connected this with Percy and Arthur; it seems to work very well. But it's such a sad ending! *wails*