This is really lovely - you have Nat and Nick down to a tee.

That was fun to read. Great job. :)

I liked it. It was cool.

I had so much fun reading this! Perfect for an entertaining, late-night read!

This fic is so good it depresses me. If only the series had been more like this... *sigh*

Yes, I admit, I'm reading 'Forever Knight' fan fics now. LOL, just kidding, only yours. It wa awesome! Even though I had no idea, when I started reading, who the characters were or what they were doing or why they were doing it, once I got near the middle I started to really like it. So this Nick guy, he's a vampire right? Awesome work, Eve! :)

Wonderful! Funny, sexy and in character. You captured the feeling of the best Nat and Nick interplay of the 1st and 2nd seasons.

Please write more and take them a step further.

Very nice banter between Nick and Nat, think you caught them very well. Hope you write more.

really good wright more!

Great story. Gosh I miss the show.

i love the story it is very funny please write more

Very good by-play between the two. I think you have a good thing going here. Please write more.