 LightDarkandChaos 2009-10-14 . chapter 10... Please update soon. This story is too good to waste. |
 Asymmetric 2009-09-06 . chapter 10Okay, I know that it's been ten months since you last updated, but I will not give up on this story, as I have witnessed hiatuses (or is it hiati?) lasting must longer, with the author STILL, after such a long wait, (and by that time I'm practically kissing the ground they walk on) coming up with new chapters.
I just have to say that this is the single most well developed, believable, all around AMAZING Harry Potter/FMA crossover I have ever read, and I've read enough to get an idea of what's good and what's not. Despite what some may say, I think that Ed (and all of the other characters, for that matter) is characterized perfectly. His struggle to regain what he lost and his introverted demeanor are just so characteristically Ed. His war-weariness and his reaction to said weariness is also characteristic. I think his temper has become cooler because of Al not being there. Oh, I wish you had them both in the story, but I know that wouldn't work for your plot.
M.E.S.S, too, is hilarious. -cracks up-
So, please update. -begs- |
 Wah-Keetcha 2009-08-20 . chapter 10 this is interesting. please continue.
w-k |
 kindigo 2009-08-15 . chapter 1lol at Hohenheim referring to *his son* as "Sie." |
 ice vixen x (nsi) 2009-08-13 . chapter 10 Sigh, i really liked this story, but you havn't finished it yet ... why? |
 Anonymous 2009-07-31 . chapter 2 Uh, sorry, but, if he had no ounce of magic, then he wouldn't be able to see Hogwarts, and what about mechanical objects not working at Hogwarts, then he wouldn't be able to use automail. |
 teapotpot 2009-07-14 . chapter 10I can't remember if I've already reviewed this story since I've read it so many times, but even if I have, I only enjoy it more with each re-read anyway. I loved Mr. Elric and I'm loving Endless Moment. You've captured the characters perfectly; Edward in particular is so well done, a great mix of mystery, misery, and dry humour. I feel like the plot is picking up, what with Ed realizing that he must help Harry with his fight, and I can't wait to read more! Keep up the amazing work! |
 Arcellant 2009-07-13 . chapter 10Astounding work you've done. Nice writing, and magnificent plot! I loved Mr. Elric, and you've done even better with this. I can't wait for more, it's just that good. =D |
 WamprickNyx 2009-07-13 . chapter 10I'm very suspicious of the DADA teacher now... *narrows eyes* He better not be planning to hurt Edward... Or M.E.S.S. will take action!! *bursts into laughter* Really they are scary, but funny.
This is a really great story, I wish I had found this sooner. As I said, the M.E.S.S. thing is... scary, but believable and the way you write Ron/Hermione is unbelievably good. I wonder why Ed's so calm, though. Maybe came with changing worlds. Or has he matured? *strokesd chin thoughtfully* Hmm... Edward Elric maturing... Interesting... Other than that, the rest of the characters are written quite well, so congratulations=D *grins* Definitely going in my faves, this is.
I really enjoyed reading this and the prequel. Please, oh please, kepp writing and don't abandon this! I can understand that you have a life and other responsibilities, but still, this is just too great to die! I beg for more chapters!!
your new admirer
nyxiee |
 zutarakid50 2009-07-06 . chapter 10AAHH!! I hate cliffhangers!
Hagrid rocks :D
New chapter? Please? plleaase?! |
 zutarakid50 2009-07-06 . chapter 9This is a really really good story! I just felt the need to say that ;)
Ed is so misterious... Could have inpersonated Ginny some how and giving that's how he tested Harry's trust? Or was that a dark arts teacher's why of getting info on Ed? I have no clue! lol |
 zutarakid50 2009-07-06 . chapter 8I'm very suspisous of that dark arts teacher now. I like this story a lot! Yay for Quidditch! |
 Bottan 2009-07-04 . chapter 10Praise, praise, praise! I love the story! :D
I thought the M.E.S.S. to be a bit over the top, but other than that you constructed a very believable and enjoyable crossover. The more complex relationships and actions get the more I enjoy this. I also like that you don't take pairings into consideration (out of Ron and Hermione, as it seems - which you conduct in a adorable fashion) - they tend to mess things up.
I'm really interested in the further development - please don't abandon the story! I'd love to read more of it! |
 zutarakid50 2009-06-27 . chapter 6It must be weird for Harry to meet someone who doesn't know who he is. (scar's a dead give away)
On another note; why hasn't Ed beat up anyone for calling him short?! (like Malfoy for instance) |
 zutarakid50 2009-06-27 . chapter 5I like the way you right Ron and Hermione. It makes me laugh XD |
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