this was just soo... enjoyable to read! :) it a pure story, a kind you dont come around a lot. so well writen, just a piece of art. thanks :) i realize its an older story but i just came across it and well, loved it! :) very beautiful.

I TOTALLY LOVE UR CODE LEO-KO STORIES!
But Burakku's Shadow could have made the "factory" and Leo-ko a little bit more magical than tech.

This was refreshing to read. It was really well written and I loved every detail. I liked that Yumi was taking voice lessons. It makes her seem more human. (the show tends to not give them a live outside Lyoko sometimes) Really loved it, great job! Thanks for the great read.

Rena

It was a great story. Nice descriptions

Really nice. This database needs more stories like this.

aw! that was so sweet! you should continue it.

Aw that was a wonderful one-shot. ur a great writer. I wish I could be half as good as you. n e how, I sure hope you write a Code:lyoko story, b/c you would make an awesome one. thanks for entertaining me. sayonara!

Nice, nice... I like it... keep up the good work. Oh, and you're going on my favorites list so I can keep an eye on your fics.
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Imagenaiton Queen

I found this story while I was searching for another one, but now I'm so glad that I've stumbled upon it. This is amazing- not only have you kept Ulrich and Yumi in character, you created an original situation that I could see as part of an actual episode. I love it! :)

Short Review: Very nice, and very long.

Actual Review: I liked how you gave detailed descriptions of what was going on, it helped give me a solid image of what was happening. You grammar was well written as well, and I did not see any mistakes through out the story.

Over all, the plot was slightly dull, but considering I never read a story like that before, I liked it more in a sense. Im also glad that you didnt add a lyoko battle in there either, after the way you began, a lyoko battle would only take away the quality (In my opinion). Very well written, and thought out. I hope that I hear another one from you soon.

There's really only one thing I can do when faced with a story like this. *she smiled, and started clapping* It's wonderful, and personally I found it pretty IC ^^ Not everyone is cheery all the time, especially faced with a letter from their parents. Ulrich playing the piano makes sense, and the singing... And Yumi.. It all just fits into place ^^ A wonderful fic, in every which way.

You did a good job at analyzing Ulrich's (and part of Yumi's) behavior. I like reading stories like this. The little details that semmingly go unnoticed make for a good plot. Keep writing.

Read...Reviewd...loved...

The way you express Ulrich's feelings, it's just...well...awe...I myself kinda related to these. Great use of language (that bit about the right hemisphere was interesting) and all around goodnes...good, clean goodness

By the way, I'm Hiroshi, from TVtome.

Ah! That was Super Kawaii! ^^ I loved it soo much!
So, I kinda hate that song, but it does work perfect for the story, and I like the idea of Ulrich being more musically inclined than people would probably give him credit for - Yumi too!

I love your writing style. It is very descriptive, yet it also didn't seem like I was reading too many words to get through a small scene, ya know?
I could really see Ulrich and Yumi's cute sweet relationship/friendship popping out of their conversations.
Great Job!
You keep up the great work, dude. And please don't make me wait a whole 'nother year for a new story. That would be just awful!

Well, I hope my rambling actually did some good and wasn't just...rambling. XD
*hug*
-Poprocks!

Although I can't imagine Ulrich contemplating suicide or Yumi thinking that he would, I think this is a great story. Rather more emotion than action, but that seems to be the current order for CL fics, and I'm not really against it.