Interesting story, giving some good explanations for the events in "Redux". I liked how you managed to hit the tone of the show perfectly. - Great work! Thanks for reviewing my story "The Fire Inside", btw. You were, however, mistaken - it wasn't Mulder's POV the story was from.

Wow! I loved it! I can't wait to read the rest of your stories! I read this awhile ago and I just reread it and it reminded me of why I liked it so much!

Good addition to "Redux." :-)

Hey that was wonderful! I often wondered what happened in that time we didn't see during "Redux" Great story!

Good expansion! You really got inside of Mulder's head! :-)

Big fan of episode additions (check out my Je souhaite add on). Good job. )

First, I want to say, thanks for the kind reviewing of my stories... And also, that this was a great Mulder POV story. Just the feeling the way he felt, knowing that he didn't want to do this, but he had to. Being the only way to get through this stage in his life, was for him to die. Very Nice. Lioness

thank you all for your kind comments. If you know someone who likes the x-files, please point them in this direction :-) I LUV feedback - it motivates me. -cheers and peace to all, A.H.Smith

Good job, Smith... :)

/Elisa

hey there! thanks so much for reviewing my story :) I really liked this one (the Redux eps are my favorites) and I think you caught Mulder's feelings really well. Thanks again! :)

Wow that was good keep up the good work I mean you seem like a very promising writer, unlike myself! I mean you should write professionally! I could as the new Daniel Steel! I really like Daniel Steel! And my dead hamster Billy Bob! ANd my boyfriend his name Koo! He likes your story too! I really appreciate you giving me that nice review! I like people like you your kick ass! Hey can I put you in my next story? Tell me if I can but not in e-mail just write me another review that would be cool we could just keep on talking this way! Well Byers! I mean I hope you like my review!

Byers!

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Good story even though I haven't seen Redux. Oh I'm so far behind with the whole X-Files thing...ooops oh yeah, reviewing the story not my life..

Another great job! Keep writing!

Good idea for a missing scene, but you have tense problems here. Some examples - "He lay the body by the couch; where he had, only minutes before, contemplating suicide." You missed completely the verb here - either "where he had been, only moments before, contemplating suicide" or "where he had, only moments before, been ..." and "'Scott Ostelhoff' it reads." should been "read" based on the tense of the rest of the paragraph. Get yourself a beta-reader to help catch the tense problems like this. You could also make your writing flow a little better, but that's more a style development. Work on fixing the grammar problems first. Style should develop as your writing improves, because your sense of how the words and sentences interact will grow.

Ooh.. good story!