i love this story it never gets old !!

Not only do I LOVE the song. i think this is great!! Lee is my favourite character in Tekken. Well the most pretty!! I'm crap at writing sex scenes!!

OMG!! RAMMSTEIN!
Yes, Spiel mit Mir, one of my favs! Sorry..sorry, I shall try to calm myself. I'm only an incredibly rabid Rammstein fan. I clicked this out of curiosity, as I don't even know the characters, but I'm glad I did. This is wonderfully written. Wrong, but still so very sexy. Just like the song! I love your descriptions. If I knew the charactes, I would definitly lengthen my review but for as far as my understanding of the situation goes, I like it! ^^

I will spare writing '*Orgasms and dies*'. :P This is amazing! The song lyrics fit in so very well with the story... And yay, it was Rammstein! I haven't heard that song in ages. :D The yaoi scene was extremely well written, as always. ^_^ Overall, a great job, sweetheart.

wow...
that was great. :)

I'm sorry, I really liked it, but I didn't know the song. Wish I did. And I have absolutely no problem with them being adopted brothers, I thought your story rocked!

This was a very well written story; I would really love to be sent the link to the other version once it's posted; this one was really well done. Also I'm afraid I don't recognize the song...what is it? Please tell me!

...ohmy...OHMY! wow, i never thought...wow

Hey ^.^ nice fic, i havent been able to find many Kaz/Lee fics so i love it lolz and it was very well written, where's the other version though? o.O im trying to find that out lolz...what's the song too? it's interesting =P

Wow. Not only hot, but extremely well written, and the song-lyrics were added tastefully. I would love to see the other version. Have you posted it anywhere else?

Nice job! It's been too long since I read a new Kazlee fic. Nicely written, hope to see more from you. ^_^
-Sapph

Very good. I haven't seen many Kazuya/Lee pairings on lately. It really is a shame because that pairing is a classic. I'd like to read the other version ^_^ so please, send me a link if you have the time. ... Unfortunately I didn't recognise the song ... It sounds quite interesting though. I'd love to check it out.

Anyway, of course I always have to add a bit of a critique whenever I review... That's the whole point of reviews, is it not? To gather feedback, and improve upon oneself? lol... well since it was so poetically put together, and well written, there was only really one thing that kind of stuck out to me. the story moved a little too fast. Of course this is a common thing. I even get told that some of my stories move to fast. Usually that just means more description and detail. ^_^ Good job. I look forward to reading more from you in the future!

~C~

Very well written. The use of words left it very mild to read while at the same time let the imagination run wild with imagery. Great job!

Finally! A new Kazuya/Lee fic! Nobody has been writing anything forever and now I'm glad to see that someone posted something new not to mention very well-written. :)