nooooo update plz!

more!

plx.

:P

Wow great story. You are planning on finishing it aren't you?

Great Beginning to a great story so finish it already. You've left your readers' guessing what is going to happen next. It isn't good to start a good story, and then not finish it.

Where is the rest of the story? You do plan on continuing, the story?

So where is the rest of the story?

It was really good but, now you've left me wondering when are you going to continue on with the story?

Where is the rest of the story? It was good but, surely that isn't the end of it?

Here is and honest question where's the rest of it?

Won't you do more stories about the Heart of War?

I have too say there is definitely and unusaul side of Ares. The Greek Myth's however stated that he was a good father, Ares just happened to be unfortunately the god of war.

In any case, I always thought that Ares would take better care of his own children and their mothers' than his deadbeat father Zeus seems to.

It would be the ultimate battle between father and son.

A chance to show daddy Zeus that Ares is good for something and unlike some people Ares knows' what it means too be a father to his children.

Husband well that is one of Ares secretive fears' he doesn't want to know whether are not he's just like Zeus in that area.

So where 's the rest of the story? You leaving people hanging here.

It's surprising Ares doesn't have more illegitimate kids running around... I mean; who wouldn't?

Didn't realise this wasn't a one off... *grumble* More please?

hey! this is a grweat story! please please update! i really like the idea! dont abandon it!

this is good one. i liked it when hercules seemed shocked that ares is bracian's father. keep updating

I am a Hercules fan but i had not seen a great fanfiction likes this i give it a 10 out of 10 rate!

This is actually pretty good. I adore Ares beyond belief, so to see a...softer (yeah that's the rightword) side of him is great. It's kind of like a story I had in mind, though I've never taken the time to write one down.

I actually have a few stories (unfinished) on here as well. Look under Nids, if you want to read.

but but but it ended so soon...you aren't going to continue it? *makes sad puppy dog face* just as i was getting into it it ended...

Hey this is really cool... i like how you are starting this...plus it is good read about hercules since i haven't seen in episode in a long while so that is cool... yeah keep writing because i really liked the show and i think you will do it justice...

keep updating

Anthony