his was wonderful! The only problems I had were how it was confusing with the doubles, since I couldn't tell who was saying what, and also I think Kurogane would be very good at hand to hand combat if he was a ninja. I mean, look at when he fought that crab kudan in the second book. He flipped around and jumped and avoided just about as well as Fai can. But other than that this was great. I like your writing style! ^_^

So I am in love with this. More than words can properly express.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. Hardcore super special awesome.

WOW!! I think...defenitively my favorite KuroxFai story ever!! I still can't believe the imagination you got to make it all seem in character and all fit so damn well!!
Thank you so much for posting this!

This is cute. It started out angsty, but the ending is just so adorable. Loved it!

I like this fic a lot! I don't know if I already reviewed it once but I don't mind doing so again. Your story is brilliant!!

That was truely awesome! Keep up the great work!

Happy writing!

Hi!
I love your story...And it got me wondering if this isn't what really happened...XD it perfectly fits into the hole of the storyline there...
The characters were all pretty much IC...and I didn't see any typos or other mistakes to report...
All in all it's perfect ^^
My favorite fic now!

that was a great fic!I just love the way you connected the 2 point s of view *__* really really a good job!thanks!!

LOVELOVELOVELOVE! *gush gush!! i can totally imagine that was what happened...

well done! you flawlessly integrated Tsubasa's Kuro-pyu and Fai into your own world ^__^

Gah! Just read it the second time! *Gasps* And I still love it

Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God! SEQUEL IS A MUST! Must reread again...must reread again *SQUEEL* WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! GAH! *dies*

I really like this story, of how there's more than one pair of KuroFai. And guest appearance of Eriol! Sorry I'm an Eriol fangirl, hee. Not to mention you have all the familar characters, Rika, Chiharu and Chii.

I like the way black eyes!Kurogane almost smacked red eyes!Kurogane for treating Fai that way, hee.

Alana: I thank you for writting this armazing Story and Hope you write many more like it!

Evo: it's wasn't bad... It was ok...

That was a great story. A completely amazing spin off to the manga. And...that's about all I can say about it: That was an amazing story, left me almost speachless. Bravo, that was simply amazing.

Nyaa! wonderful fic and happy ending ^_^