You should.

Dude this is hilarious! Very nice writing though the italics are sometimes all weird and stuff... ; but anyway, excellent stuff, though please no more rap in the next installments XD

Aw, Axl should've come to me for a story. I have a nice collection of fantasy novels...

And yes, Sigma's chin does, in fact, look like a butt. *giggle*

LMFAO! HAHAHAHAHA! XD

Funny

FUNNIO!

You definitely should. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing.

Okay! that was very unusual. First MacDonalds? I don't think that place existed back then. I also seriously doubt that X or Zero would read those kids of magazines or Axl a rapper. Heheh, but it was pretty humorous because it could never happen. Don't try to bend the truth too much when doing these stories. stick to the basic and it'll end up funny anyways. well it was funny and i could have used the laugh. good job.

Me: That was so funny. Let Zero tell a story next time to get back at X.

Rika: Maybe Sleeping beauty or whatever it was called.

Me: You are so evil, yami *laughs till she almost dieds*

Rika: Me and my big mouth. *looks at Elke* Keep breathing.

I laughed my butt off when I read this. PLZ make another one like:

The 3 little pigs or Jack and the beanstalk or something else.

Jesus Christ, that was funny!

Yes, I think you should make another one. And Signas could be the bad guy in it as X's revenge for making him write the stupid report that's not due till next week. Maybe he could be CinderAlia's evil stepmother or something.

XD That was awsome! Yes, you should make another one!

That was so funny. Silly Sigma. Axl the Rapper *laughs like Crazy* that was hilarious! I loved it. esecially the part where the destroyed Sigma while he was tr

Hm...not bad I thoroughly enjoyed it. However, a little bit more work on the characters personality would improve it and more humour! Other wise it was good. Keep it up. I love stories starrin my fav char Zero!