I found it a bit strange reading your work without punctuation, but in the end, I found your poetry style writing quite charming. In the movie, you are so sure she is sure that he loves her, but you brought up doubts any woman would have when chasing after the man she loves, especially when there is so much at stake. It makes one wonder...

A very nice poem - you just managed to find exactly the right words!

i like your poem. it shows insight, and it's cool. i'll look for more from you.