This is great.

Everyone is in character and I like the Cosmo scene and Vicky/Chip one.

I like your references to canon.

The "You Are Now Leaving Dimmsdale...WHY!" sign was funny.

Great chapter, and great end-of-chapter segment!

Great story!

This is great.

Everyone is in character.

I like the Vicky/Chip romantic scene at the end. You're really good at showing why they love each other and how they express it.

Tootie is a good choice for a secret agent of love.

I love your humorous references to canon.

Great chapter!

Great story!

This is great.

Everyone is in character.

I like how Vicky refused to kiss Skip and how Tootie rescued her.

Special Operative Trudy is great name for Tootie's secret identity and I like how Tootie lied and called Cupid, "Big C", which is a really spy-like name.

I like how the end-of-chapter segment involved Norm, since he's my favorite FOP character EVER! Norm and Crocker sure have humorous interactions, don't they?

Norm deciding that he'd send Crocker to Saturn next time was hilarious!

Great chapter!

Great story!

This is great.

Everyone's in character.

I like how Tootie got powers and a bigger role in the story.

This fic sure is humorous.

Great chapter!

Great story!

This is great.

Everyone is in character and it's humorously FOP style.

I like how you introduced Cupid.

Great chapter!

Great story!

This is great.

Everyone is in character and their reactions are believable.

Oh, dramatic - and humorous, of course.

I like the end-of-chapter segment.

Great chapter!

Great story!

This is great.

Everyone is in character.

I like how Tootie cared about Vicky and Chip Skylark's song, Lovesicky for Vicky.

I like how you mentioned Tootie's crush on Timmy.

Humorous and dramatic!

Great chapter!

Great fanfic!

This is great.

Everyone is in character.

I like how well you write FOP style.

I like how well you wrote the Vicky/Chip romance, and Vicky's argument with Tootie.

The Vicky/Chip romance is cute.

Great chapter!

Great fanfic!

This is great!

Everyone is in character and the references to canon are humorous, like the "mean salt, you'll never work in this town again."

I like Chip's reasoning for dumping Britney Britney. It makes sense.

The end-of-chapter segment is funny, as always.

This is great.

Everyone is in character.

You are great at the start/end-of-chapter character script conversation things.

Vicky's response to the fan letter was hilarious.

The last line was so In Character for Vicky.

Good chapter!

Great fic!

This is great.

Everyone is In Character.

The line about Chip Skylark having a teeth fetish was hilarious.

The conversation about Vicky taking Chip hostage was great.

Good chapter!

Great fic!

This is great.

I like how in character everyone is.

I like how you used the line:

"And what is a personal assistant if not a babysitter to the stars?”

twice, like the show sometimes does with lines.

Good chapter!

Aw, so cute and sweet.You are truly awesome."bows to awesomeness"
bye :)

I'm in love with this story! It was awesome and I can actually imagine it happening in the series. Good job! This fic's going into my favorites. :)

I love how you write! I especially loved chapter 6. I think its so sweet how Chip is still after Vicky even after all that she has put him thru. I also love how you make it more mature than in the shows. Its like what real teenagers often go thru. Keep up the story! Its really good so far!