I loved this! Especially the last but one paragraph - very ironic.

Great! Are you going to add more chapters? I always love your stories, and the way you see the Black family, please continue to write wonderful fanfiction. Great story I loved it. *hugs*

LOL

Cool are you going to uppdate?

I like the parallel to James and Lily.

This is really good. I've never heard of that pairing. This better not be a one shot. If it's not, it was a smart way to start it off instead of the usual start of them fighting. It was cool the way you did it from mcgonagall's and madame pomfrey's point of view. The only thing that you should change is McGonagall's name. It's not Minevra, it Minerva.