Keep updating!

"But their conversation was cut short as none other but Sesshounaru came walking through the bushes, standing with his regal pure blood heir."

that line confused me. Sesshomaru had a heir already ( in the fanfic )?

coolio.keep writing and update asap!

Sincerely,

Tessa Rose

That was depressing

Open ended is an understatement. It's not even finished. I should hope you will make a sequel, or just continue it, because right now, it's kind of ridiculous. No offense, I liked the story... but I have a few things to say.

Since you didn't introduce Sessh until the last chapter, it leaves us kinda lost. You could've mentioned him earlier or something...

And, um, Miroku's death. A bit sudden, no? He sucks the monster in, then suddenly he's gone. You didn't really take into account the fact that if anyone was nearby, they would be sucked in too, either. But there was something else I thought was ridiculous, too... ah, yes.

"After some grieving, they decided to turn back and go forward with their journeys. What else could they do?"

Um, one word. DETAIL.

Ooh. Very open-ended. Maybe you should make a seqel. I have recently been intruduced to the wonderful SangoXSesshomaru pairing, and this story has made me enjoy it even more. So...could you please make a sequel? I would be most grateful. Buh-bye!

No,can you continue PLeezz it was geting intersting i want to know what happens NEXT

Wow, touching indeed. Glad to have read this piece. You did such a fabulous job!

Wow, touching indeed. Glad to have read this piece. You did such a fabulous job!

Aw, not so late this time! It seems like I’m never late for the ending things

Man, I hate that it had to end like that…I wanted more…Oh well, see you in fanfiction.

Hmm, interesting ending indeed. I like what you did though, a tragic feel with a bitter sweet outcome. I also love how you in cooperated Rin and Jakken into the mixture. Very well done and in character indeed.

So, she didn’t end up with Miroku in the end, you did a good job. I think Sango just needed some time alone to think. You have her character down very well, and once again Inuyasha messed up…Poor guy.

What a tragic ending. Very bitter-sweet. You have a knack for writing and I can’t wait to see what else you do with this and many other couples in your upcoming works. I can’t wait to see what you do with My Fate.

Great ending. I like her interactions with Rin and Jakken. Lol, funny but sweet.

I was once told to be honest with people no matter if the truth was something they did not want to hear so

I dont want to come off as a jerk or be miss interpreted as a flame cuz im just expessing what i feel when i read this story

This is a sango miroku fic that couple you gave it emotions an wrotte this as there own fic it might have ended differently than the usual sango miroku fics but it is one an angst filled one it showed love an sorrow by both characters

It does not belong on the sango sesshoumaru section because it does not contain that couple in this story there is no emotions there is no love there is just understanding an perhaps friendship nothing more perhaps the follow up to this might be a sango sesshoumaru but this one it is not

We did not see the demon lord till the end we did not see a conection between them an we did not see then exchange words or express emotions but we did see all those things with miroku an sango great story wrong section

very nicely done tough well written story good depiction of the characters just didnt have the couple i was expecting

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