Me: Wow...that's sad...someone who hasn't updated in a longer time that me.

Jardina: I have to agree...that IS sad.

Me: XP, anyway, good chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Chuckles: CONTINUE!

No wonder it was finished a lot sooner than you thought it would be because that is VERY short. The story's title is a good one, but to be honest, that wasn't very exiting. Maybe if you made it longer there would be more time for interesting things. I think this could be really good, but you need to work on it a lot more before it gets there.
And also, we don't know that Pegasus was sent to the shadow realm. It's just assumed.
Sorry to sound so negative here. Again, I think that if you put work into this, it could be a great fic. The idea is top notch. As for the writing, I'm sure you can do better--and I'll be cheering for you.

Good to see you back in action with pegazus!!
Maybe he can have a nice trip to ancient times or sth like this with Yami Malik? :D

good job! YAH!
liz: please be nice and write more!
alas: PLEASE!
setea: k 10 out of 10 and pst they went nuts.
liz: GET OVER HERE SETEA!

me: YAY!

Chuckles: YAYYAYYAY!

Shana: yay!

Jardina: -_-U

Chuckles: CONTINUE! ^^